浅薰 发表于 2022-12-26 21:05   全显示 1楼
楚大是我非常喜爱的作者，这篇青龙公子第一章和二三章发表的时间跨度可真够大的。每章篇幅都不短，但恕我直言，可能我吹毛求疵了，三章看完感觉故事构架的世界和故事情节还没展开，实在是不够吸引人啊。楚大是否考虑加快故事节奏，最好能设置贯穿全文的悬念，这样才能吸引读者追更呀~另外，灵魂浪子的设定比这个有意思多了，楚大辛苦，多更灵魂浪子吧。呵呵~

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