anta1234 发表于 2012-5-15 22:40   只看TA 91楼
就这样就上手了?也太简单了吧,而且,要是我的话,这样勾搭两句就能上床的话,送到嘴边我也不敢吃,谁晓得她身经多少棍了,干不干净
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qazw987852244 发表于 2012-6-14 13:23   只看TA 92楼

不喜欢这种写作风格,题材还是很好的。加油

不喜欢这种写作风格,题材还是很好的。加油
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zgmfx10 发表于 2012-11-26 14:43   只看TA 93楼
情节太简单,
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兰色懒猫 发表于 2012-11-26 15:28   只看TA 94楼
题材倒是不错,可惜写的差了点,加油吧,希望能继续写出好的文来
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球球球球 发表于 2012-11-26 16:17   只看TA 95楼
很有创意的文章啊,第一次见到,很有新意。谢谢分享
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wangbuliao853 发表于 2015-7-15 04:08   只看TA 96楼
文章手新颖是,就是剧情太过单薄了,肉战再多谢详细一点就好了,
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